色城浪子 发表于 2008-11-24 14:17   全显示 1楼
呵呵，了大的水平真是高啊，捉奸是越来越有名堂了，现在己不单单是捉奸，可以说己经是雇奸了，庆庆的心理己无可捉摸，无奈之极，一种男人的悲哀写的凄惨之至。
了大的文章，情节构思可谓巧妙之极，文章叙事风格也较为独特，正叙、倒叙，回忆、插曲，了大总能把握的十分到位，让读者在情节转折间清楚事件发生的背景，交待事件发展的原因。从本文看，似乎还要铺的很宽很宽，整个故事虽以捉奸为主线，但好像涉及很广，尤其是庆庆的复杂背景，想来完整的故事一定好看，期待了大的后续。
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