[离任作者] 【姐夫的荣耀】 <45> 我生气的后果更严重

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1楼大中小发表于 2009-9-15 21:31 显示全部帖子

个人的一点建议：
1，关于乱伦内容，李中翰的母亲不应参与其中，影响整篇小说的美感；
2，增加小君的同学、朋友故事情节，想必更加精彩；
3，官场的黑幕色情可加大力度挖掘，必会起到引人遐思的震撼效果！

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霁月金币 +6 好建议 2009-9-15 21:54

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