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[征文作品] 【岁末征文活动】【秋叶飘梦】

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故事情节虽然简单,但是还算完整,而且最后结尾也合理化了。

本文的关键是大段的强奸描写,这也是本文的精华,不同于其他的性文,本文的性描写刻画女人的心理更叫男人有了性趣。
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