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[唯美纯爱] 【归还世界给你改写】 17章

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1楼 大 中 小 发表于 2023-3-16 15:07  显示全部帖子
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排版在句中断开，有如便秘时卡断一截的怪异感
对话标点符号也同样，感觉上显得粗糙了
尤其是场景描写，总感觉是可以润色开来写得更有色气的却只是干巴巴地描述，加油吧
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